First page

Three months ago I felt brave (or stupid) one day and sent off page one of the mystery that follows Redneck Tarot (tentatively titled Redneck Hex) to Dear Author, a mostly romance review blog that posts first pages from readers each Saturday for other readers to critique.

Mine is up this week.

The critiquers have been very kind and insightful, offering constructive criticism about every item on the page, something I've noticed each week as I've read and often commented on the other first pages that have appeared.

So, if you're feeling brave (or stupid) and you've got a first page that you'd like some feedback on, give Dear Author a shot. Then read and comment on the others each Saturday. It's only fair that you offer clear, constructive, kind criticism to the brave souls who put their work out if you expect the same in return. And be patient. Like I said, I submitted in September, but it was worth the wait.

Now, I just need to get to work on revisions.

Comments

Terri C. said…
Reading the comments on your first page was almost like getting thrown into a pool fully clothed on a hot summer day--startling but kind of refreshing and exciting. You're brave and wise to participate. Reading similar criticism after the book is published would not be so refreshing.
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